Saved by the Alien Warriors

Posted on 06 May 2017 by Stella Dawn

On my 21st birthday, I get the worst birthday present ever my dear old dad sells me on the galactic black market to save his own ass I wake up in an ooze tank light years away from earth The two aliens before me say they re here to save me I freak out, because they re freaking aliens But when the shots start flying, I decide it s better to let them do what they want with me than stick around Maybe I was a bit too hasty They think I m their mate I think they re crazy Do these two insanely muscular, sexy, alpha alien men really want a plus sized girl like me Let s just say they re going to have to do a lot of convincing to get me on board with something like that Together All night long I m a lot to handle, and they can t wait to prove they re big enough men for the job. Free Download eBook Saved by the Alien Warriors By Stella Dawn – kino-fada.fr Uh oh Chapter 12, location 1599 is duplicated exactly in chapter 14 location 1802 I thought that it was a glitch, but wasn t and kind of threw me off the story a bit The story s concept was good, but the flaw distracted me.On the 1 5 star scale, it s a minus 13It s so badly written as to be nonsensical The author cannot keep her heroes names straight, cannot string a logical conversation together, and turns their extensive inner monologues into senseless babbling English grammar skills are so lacking that the reader must stop to translate for missing words, incorrect word usage, verb tense errors, and mangled idioms That, plus untold formatting errors, also leads me to suspect no professional editorial invol On the 1 5 star scale, it s a minus 13It s so badly written as to be nonsensical The author cannot keep her heroes names straight, cannot string a logical conversation together, and turns their extensive inner monologues into senseless babbling English grammar skills are so lacking that the reader must stop to translate for missing words, in...Great read Luna is kidnapped by her sperm donor dad , he is in business with the Royal Dragons, that require a daughter, so he gets a woman pregnant, on her 21st birthday, wants to meet her, drugs her, to ship her to the Royal Dragons But 2 mercenaries, hired to steal something else from the Royal Dragons, see her in a cryogenic chamber, and as he is an escaped slave can t leave her there, breaks her out and takes...This was bad.Very bad It really needed editing and the story telling was appalling I can t believe this mess was ever published I would not recommend this mess to anyoneTraded awayThis is the third book by Stella Dawn that I ve read I have to admit that she is now a go to author for a good read because I m never disappointedNoGrammar is so bad I couldn t finish the book Also chapters 12 15 are repeats I do not recommend this book.Good startI enjoyed this book Enjoyed the love between the brothers and their shared mate Looking forward to the next book.

06 May 2017

Stella Dawn