The Shop on Main (Comfort Crossing #1)

Posted on 07 October 2017 by Kay Correll

Sometimes, doing the right thing backfiresBella Amaud is desperate when she learns her business and the home she lives in with her two boys is about to be whisked out from under her As she scrambles to maintain her fragile financial security and independence, she fears she may lose than just The Shop on Main and her home.Nothing is working out like Bella planned she finds out the man she is falling for, Owen Campbell, is the businessman at the center of all her problems.Owen has secretly longed to belong somewhere anywhere his whole life When he decides to give his long lost brother, Jake, back his birthright, he unknowingly thwarts his briefly held hope of a place where he can put down roots and a family he longs for.Nothing is working out like Owen planned neither Bella nor Jake wants anything to do with him.How can a man who is used to being in control and a woman determined to make it all on her own find a way to happiness The Shop on Main is Book One of the Comfort Crossing series Bella and her best friends, Jenny and Becky Lee, navigate the heartaches and triumphs of love and life in the small southern town of Comfort Crossing, Mississippi. Best Read [ The Shop on Main (Comfort Crossing #1) ] author [ Kay Correll ] – kino-fada.fr Enjoyed the book, there s no swearing , killing, sex and a happy ending, whatcan you ask for Read in a day, once I started,it was a book you wanted to finish and then was disappointed when you did The plot was compelling small town...Dreadful This was really a waste of my time I would like to forget I ever read it but my conscience tells me I need to warn others to not waste their time The basic premise of the story was one I was happy enough to be reading at the time simple uncomplicated and clean romance It started out well enough but I gotandirritated with the author as it went on First off were the very poorly placed descriptions of minor characters for no reason at all Clearly she means for them to be Dreadful This was really a waste of my time I would like to forget I ever read it but my conscience tells me I need to warn others to not waste their time The basic premise of the story was one I was happy enough to be reading at the time simple uncomplicated and clean romance It started out well enough but I gotandirritated with the author as it went on First off were the very poorly placed descriptions of minor characters for no reason at all Clearly she means for them to be main characters in follow up books but in the setting of this story the descriptions are tangents that add nothing but word count Then there is the repetition Many thoughts and commentary were repeated Either she forgot she already wrote it and did not hire an editor, or she thinks her audience is too stupid to recall what was in the prior chapter, or possibly just another heavy handed w...Another predictable amateur romanceWhat is it about amateur writers inability to see the repetitive narrative in their writing These books would be half the size if whittled down to writing that wasn t completely redundant And it gets really old when the reason they can t be together part of the formula is completely dependant on the woman being an immature vindictive brat, while the guy is inexplicably altruistic and smitten with said woman while acting like a little brat EVERY ONE So com Another predictable amateur romanceWhat is it about amateur writers inability to see the repetitive narrative in their writing These books would be half the size if whittled down to writing that wasn t completely redundant And it gets really old when the reason they can t be together part of the formula is completely dependant on the woman being an immature vindictive br...I am usually a sucker for this kind of story, I love happy endings, who doesn t However, I was very disappointed in this book The story was boring, the characters were OK, the dialogue was very forced and did not flow well The story didn t have anything exciting in it, and it was very awkward readi...Very disappointing book Why the author portrayed the protagonist, as well the other main characters, as weak, superficial and immature while continually stating they were strong, independent women is beyond me Did she think just verbalizing that phrase over and over made is so Sin...I really wanted to like this book, but somehow found myself skipping entire pages, wanting something to happen The characters were one dimensional and the plot wasn t very well developed Combined with the typos, this book just didn t live up to its potential.Too much repetition, author needs to learn to show not tell everything The characters especially the leading man were boring and almost robotic Just couldn t finish.Story 3.5A fairly short book that put a lot of content in the book without rushing it Neat trick when an author can do that.Bella rebuilds her life after her controlling husband divorces her, they have two small boys and she s managed to build a nice life Living above her shop on Main street with her sons, having an uneasy truce with her Ex and sharing custody of their boys.We ll in comes Owen who is town for his own personal reasons no spoilers and disrupts her life almost as any divorce wo Story 3.5A fairly short book that put a lot of content in the book without rushing it Neat trick when an author can do that.Bella rebuilds her life after her controlling husband divorces her, they have two small boys and she s managed to build a nice life Living above her shop on Main street with her sons, having an uneasy truce with her Ex and sharing custody of their boys.We ll in comes Owen who is town for his own personal reasons...Finished it, but can t say it was a tremendous read Way too many repetition in the storytelling It just got annoying After three times I know Bella values her independence, I didn t need all the conversations between other people discussing Bella s amazing independence Yawn.This book was a fun read and I liked the characters and the way things were presented I couldn t figure out how the situation could possibly be solved to make it all wrapped up, but it was great Another clean, classy book with great characters.

English
07 October 2017

Kay Correll