Steamy (The Marriage Groups #1.5)

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Dear Author,There is nothing better than a hot shower after a hot and sweaty workout unless it s hot shower sex.I just finished working out and i thought i was alone when I stepped into the locker room i froze in my tracks when i saw 3 pairs of eyes stared at me as if they want to eat me alive what s a guy to do Photo Description Three hot, buff, naked young men in a communal shower have all paused to stare at the viewer.This story was written as a part of the M M Romance Group s Love is Always Write event Group members were asked to write a story prompt inspired by a photo of their choice Authors of the group selected a photo and prompt that spoke to them and wrote a short story.Read the story here or find it in Love Is Always Write Volume 9. New Read [ Steamy (The Marriage Groups #1.5) ] By [ Vicktor Alexander ] – kino-fada.fr Sadly, I couldn t focus on the characters and the plot as I was constantly distracted by the unanswered questions throughout the book view spoiler I wanted to care about Tabansi, Taggart, Jordy and Maddock but there were various new concepts being presented, about the world they were living in, the quartet they had to form in order to be accepted by law and society and what role each individual played within the marriage group that I lost interest of what was going on between the men.It also s Sadly, I couldn t focus on the characters and the plot as I was constantly distracted by the unanswered questions throughout the book view spoiler I wanted to care about Tabansi, Taggart, Jordy and Maddock but there were various new concepts being presented, about the world they were living in, the quartet they had to form in order to be accepted by law and...I liked this story quite a bit I think it had a great potential for the world, but it also fell short of what I needed by way of explanation of the world itself I had so many world building questions left at the end, I was confused and very disappointed they weren t answered.The general idea is a world not Earth, based on the country city names where men bond in groups of four In order to be recognized as an official group, there must be four Why is not explained And one of those four mus I liked this story quite a bit I think it had a great potential for the world, but it also fell short of what I needed by way of explanation of the world itself I had so many world building questions left at the end, I was confused and very disappointed they weren t answered.The general idea is a world not Earth, based on the country city names where men bond in groups of four In order to be recognized as an official group, there must be four Why is not explained And one of those four must be a cora o means heart in Portuguese and in this story What one is, why how they are different, why they are treated differently legally from other men not allowed to have sex before being married , etc is not explained What the soiree is is not explained Is it just cora ...author opinion I m biased but I really enjoyed writing something that was a little out of the box for this genre I loved writing about Tabansi and his men and the fact that I got to write an interracial, gay love story with four men getting it on with som...Pretty badly written pornography with lots of inconsistencies and no real explanation of the world It was sexy, but pretty cheesy and not great work.I was expecting better from Vicktor Alexander s reputation.PWP that didn t really connect with me.3.5 Yes, that was steamy Love the interpretation of the photo Thank you Vicktor Alexander, for donating your story, time and talent.Ugh, this world has so much potential and yet I don t think I will read The Marriage Groups 1 because both books seem to suffer from the same problem illogical sequences of events.Insta love is not a deal breaker for me As long as there s good writing, likeable characters, and an engaging plot, I can usually be distracted from it But here Not only am I already having trouble keeping track of the characters, but the MC specifically points out Second of all, what did he really know about the Ugh, this world has so much potential and yet I don t think I will read The Marriage Groups 1 because both books seem to suffer from the same problem illogical sequences of events.Insta love is not a deal breaker for me As long as there s good writing, likeable characters, and an engaging plot, I can usually be distracted from it But here Not only am I already having trouble keeping track of the characters, but the MC specifically points out Second of all, what did he really know about the three older men He knew they were gorgeous, yes, and what they did for a living He...This is a fun short story with some great ideas and concepts the group of four men as a legal marriage unit, for example , and I enjoyed the main characters getting to know each other There are some pretty hot moments as well This story idea could go far ifdetails were worked out The whole background of this society sounds fascinating, and I wantTabansi is still grieving for the loss of his two lovers, who were not enough to let them legally marry The moment they finally find a This is a fun short story with some great ideas and concepts the group of four men as a legal marriage unit, for example , and I enjoyed the main characters getting to know each other There are some pretty hot moments as well This story idea could go far ifdetails were worked out The whole background ...It s basically pornography with very little world building The sex was hot And I like the double penetration scene very much, haven t read many of those But there was a lot of things left unexplained Ex Each marriage group always has 4 people, they can t get permission to marry unless there are 4 But for what purpose To createhotness roll eyes Tabansi mentioned in the book, if he fails to get married, he might be sold into prostitution But what s about his family Where d ...I actually read the longer version of this that the author offered I also read Elian first which I do think helps since Steamy is actually written in a time frame after Elian With having done that the whole of the ...

Steamy (The Marriage Groups #1.5)
  • English
  • 06 October 2017
  • ebook
  • 56 pages
  • Vicktor Alexander
  • Steamy (The Marriage Groups #1.5)